Dog Savior.

While reading the news, I came across this article about a  dog that saved a family's life. The family left the stove on in the night, and at  midnight, the gas was leaking out of the stove. The dog woke the parents up and they turned off the stove.

I found it interesting because it just shows that if you treat dogs well, then they will be very loyal to you.

It makes me think of  when your dog does even the littlest thing to help you, it makes you realise that they really are so special.

My opinion about  that dog is he is so loyal and will do anything for that family. After being rescued from an animal shelter 2 weeks before, he must have been so grateful.

I wish I understood why dogs are so loyal, and yet cats aren’t.

Now I understand why it’s so important to treat your dog how they want because maybe one day they might just save your life.

This is similar to when a dog I saw on T.V saved a family from a fire when they left the stove on.

I wonder if some dogs do this to thank their owners for looking after them and if you mistreat them, they protect themselves but not you.

I really like the way the dog was so protective and never gave up trying to wake up the humans.

I realised that dogs really are more than a pet, and they are  a loyal friend.

My First Draft

Maddy

Her curly, messy, shiny brown hair, looks as though she has been dragged through the bush. It waves and quivers with every movement she makes. Although it is so soft, it looks like she never washes it. She has fair, creamy, skin, that feels so soft, you could mistake it for cotton. It gets sunburnt so easily, she has to coat herself in sunscreen whenever she is outside.

Those long, amazing legs, stretch on forever making her tower up above me. She has gotten so tall now because of those long powerful legs. I bet she could run forever and ever.  Eyes as blue as the ocean, sit on her friendly, freckled face. I think, that anything that passes her, secretly catches her eye. They are so deep and blue you couldn’t tell if they had water in them or not.

My Revised Writing

Maddy

Her curly, messy, brown hair, looks as though she has been dragged through the bush. With every movement she makes, it waves. Although it feels so smooth, it looks like she never washes it. She has creamy, fair skin, that feels so delicate and soft, you could mistake it for cotton. The sun burns her skin easily, she has to coat herself in sunscreen, whenever she’s outside.

Those long, incredible, legs, stretch on forever making her tower above me. She has gotten so tall now, because of those expanded, powerful, legs. I bet she could run forever and ever.  Eyes, a stunning deep blue, sit on her freckled face. I bet, that when anything passes her, she sees it. They are so blue, you couldn’t tell if they had water in them or not.

100 Word Challenge

Once upon a time there was an Elephant named Ellie and a horse named River. They were walking in the woods one day and they found a girl that was crying. Ellie and River did all they could to calm the girl down but she just wouldn’t stop crying. She explained that she had lost her teddy. Suddenly River spotted the teddy and Ellie got it down. The girl and the teddy were reunited and they girl finally stopped crying. The girl told the teddy off for running away, and she said. “ My name is Abigail” and she skipped off.

RWC Boy.

I feel like I’m dreaming, although I know it’s real.  Maybe it's not!  Did Sonny Bill just give me his medal? He did, no he can’t have.  I’m so overwhelmed and I can’t believe that just happened. I’m the luckiest kid in the world!

I can hear lots of cheering and screaming, and everyone is so excited for me. I hear so much shouting,  I feel as if I will go deaf. All the shouts faded away when Sonny Bill gave me his medal, but now they are back.

I think I smell sausages cooking on a barbecue waiting to be eaten, but I’m too excited to want one. That medal means so much to me, although it stinks of a sweaty rugby jersey. The sweat is so salty and smells of the sea.

I can taste the sweat on the medal when I kiss it. It tastes of salty sweat that makes me want to vomit. I still do it again,  although I’m too happy to notice the taste anymore.